my english task (recount text)

 Several year ago ,when i went home from school,
i was theres was a bag in mom's room, then i asked her but unfortunately she didn't come home yet, she was still in her office , then i asked to my servant , but the answer was bad for me,..because she didn't know why,..
then i asked to my second sister,..
and the answer was same --"
 Because i was so tired , then i overslept and forgot about everything that i've planed
,I got my phone yell ,qnd that's from mom
But , when i hang up the phone , it was end
then i waited twice calling from her,but it came so long :'(
 And i checked in her room , the bag was gone..and my second sister was startin' cried ,..then whe phone rang,but it cam from stranger , we didn't know where it came from,..because the number was so long and looked like from aboard :O
,but my second sister kept hanging up the phone and took talk with the stanger ,
suddenly she cried,..then i took the phone from her,
then,..that was from mom,.. mom told us if there was a problem which she should over it,.. then she apologize to us, because didn't tell us before

                                                                                        (maydrilla P.C/20)